Super cute story so far! I'm excited to read more

it is tedious but the background work is really interesting and well thought out so far

"[Kyoko] was so innately tied in with the scheme that he couldn't separate her from the idea, not even on a subconscious level"
I love that line.
Loving this story!

I just wanted to leave another review to tell you that I think about this story every now and then when I hear a good song. I think to myself, ah, the Shou from that Sho Business fiction might like this. And then I think about the scene at the bar, Shou standing in, Kyoko getting tipsy, and the jean jacket that he made her wear.

Ahhhh, you wrote some seriously great stuff!

OMGGGGG Actually crying. Holy. Crap.
The level of care that you took to imagine this past is just absolutely astronomical. You have blown literally everyone out of the water. What was the nature of Sho's love for Kyoko? Nobody seemed to get it right, relying solely on Kyoko's looks as Natsu or Setsu or whatever ; we forget they had a complete history with entwined insecurities and dreams. Wow. Amazing.
I completely get it now ... how Sho could have done what he did - using Kyoko. And what it meant for him to care about it. But I'm eagerly waiting for you to write about both their growths and how they changed. Will you possibly root Sho's abandonment of Kyoko (or the other way around) in a desire to see her grow or at least in a sort of dislike of the way she is, incapable of being herself? Your Sho truly loves Kyoko. So how could he have made such a colossal mistake? And yet, there are serious issues, as well. Kyoko can't go on like this. Sho can't go on like this, being this person a pedestal. It's so touching though.
Wow. I can't wait to see how you make everyone evolve. The punk club scene was sooooo good. Wow.
Thank you so much for writing even this. Absolutely a home run. Can't wait until you write Ren and Kanae ... I'm so excited ... Wow...

Oh my god, I want to cry. Kyoko makes me want to cry. Relatable and yet so sad. I want to cram myself into this story as a random transmigrating OC just to tell her how amazing, how beautiful, how powerful, smart, kind and AMAZING she is. I want to tell her that who we are today is not indicative of who we could be in a year. Oh my gosh, I want to cry. This is soooo well written. Wow, you concocted such a breathtaking mix of selfishness and love for Kyoko on the part of Sho. Have to continue this... you have me hooked... - cry -

whooooaaaaa...
this was not what I expected of this story. But WOW. This is amazing. The characterisations are so good; the original characters are so good. And Kyoko and Sho and GOOD. Wow.
Gonna read some more...

me gusta la historia,

So I was going to wait until the latest chapter to review, but I love this chapter so much already. Sho feeling so helpless when he sees her cry and sort of accidentally asking her to marry him just because he gets caught up in the spiral. That said, this might not be the best long term choice.

Males in Japan cannot marry until they are 18 years old, females are the only ones who can marry after 16.

I wish you would update. You have a good grasp on the character voices and motivations and you made the early days seem realistic. You also seemed to know where you were heading with the story, what happened?

This has got to be the best skip beat ff i've ever read. I can't wait to know what happens next and really hope you finish it.

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Haha! Interesting! I'm excited! Is this an AU? I hope so.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Can I just tell you right now that this is so great!? I really like their relationship!