Err... that was really creepy... not in good way. I don't think I would read that pairing again. It's just weird and fucked up, once again not in good way. thanks for writing it.

Argh! Why is this fic unfinished? I would really like to read more. I haven't seen a fic like this on this site. Is there no way you will ever complete it?

Regardless, the emotion is very well done and you write for Max very well. I would love some more description from his point of view, and I hope Norman isn't dead. Who else would be able to mount a daring rescue?