What about super rare steaks?

With the mention of Sprite i remembered (and smiled) a BIG character on Sherrilyn Kenyon's novels... Acheron...

if it's her birthday, and she was conceived around bella's birthday, plus the month of pregnancy it has to be around 1/3 of october... there will be yellow and orange leaves but no snow yet... it usually won't snow in western WA around this time.

There's absolutely no way at all that Alice wouldn't realize that the Bella in her visions is a vampire. Not even a single chance would that not be noticed. Especially when her eyes were blazing red and are now gold. Another huge hole in the story.

It would have made way more sense if Bella cut all contact with her parents after the change. Edward saw that email, so he had her email address and could easily trace her IP address. He could also do that with the phone number Charlie gave him. There's no way he wouldn't have done that or not thought of it. There's too many holes in this story.

I think Angela was a really bad choice and Bella didn't even explain shit yet. That's asking way too much from anyone. It would have been interesting if Bella had gone through all of this alone.

love love love love!

I really enjoyed the Renesmee Bellaparts of this story. Thanks for a fun read!

God if there is one thing I can’t stand in stories it’s when a girl tries to pull away and a man grabs her wrist because she is going to listen to her then run after her after even when she wants to be alone. It’s disrespectful but I see it in a lot of Twilight stories.

That’s the only thing I don’t like about Alice. Two people should be able to work their issues out in their own time, not because someone wants them to be together immediately because the whole family wants it.

You just showed some backbone girl. Good for you.

I truly hope she doesn’t just take him back right away. Regardless I love this story. Been a few years since it finished but am enjoying it very much.

I approve of your music tastes.

Edward can't read Renessme's thoughts.

The family hurt her w/o knowing it. I would of run too