| Reviews for 5 and 1: Shore Leave |
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Sally chapter 1 . 2/26 This group of stories had me laughing like crazy! Love the airplane parachute jump one, with Spock...”This is most Definitely Not Good,” When his chute fails to open, And when McCoy finds the two in the hot tub, his cry of “Holy Shit My Retinas!” Brought me to tears with laughter! You know, if you remove the SLASH elements, you could do a cute series of just Kirk/Spock Vignettes, like these, either Universe, for posting for General Fanfic Readers. You have a great sense of humor. Just a suggestion! |
fanficlover246 chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 That was amazing. I love Bones reaction , "MY RETINAS" |
BleuFlyinKittens chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 OMG MCCOYS REACTION! Best. Reaction. Ever. |
LoveGaara chapter 1 . 4/6/2012 "I did not see an aquatic bird, Captain."! ROFL ohh god i loved this fic ! . |
Too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 10/29/2011 *falls off couch laughing, while my family looks at me like I'm crazy* OH. MY. GOD. I loved it! Especially the snowball fight and Bones freaking out at the end. You two are amazing for writing this. |
roswellwbfan chapter 1 . 10/8/2010 "I did not see an aquatic bird, Captain." OMG that was frickin' hilarious! Nicely done. |
TheMadNavigator chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 DEAR SURAK PLEASE MORE JACUZZI FUN! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP OF A CHOCOLATE DRIZZLED SPOCK! |
Super Ultra Sexy Spockfish chapter 1 . 6/25/2010 lol that was awesome! YAY! *insert giggle fit* |
myOTHERaccount chapter 1 . 6/17/2010 Sorry, couldn't log in. But Christ on a cracker, that was awesome. Usually these aren't that good, but you did an amazing job. Keep up the good work. . |
Jazzy chapter 1 . 6/3/2010 This is the best 5&1 I have ever read. Seriously; I am a english lit teacher at A&M Texas U, and the two of you collaborated on this fanfiction in perfect unison. It was impossible to tell where one writer left off and anouther picked it up again. 5 stars and if it wasnt for the sexual implications, i would print it off and have my class read it! |
CooperV chapter 1 . 3/6/2010 Would it be weird if i said i wanted to whorship you? this 5&1 is pure genius! i made my 3 friends read it and they are STILL laughing at the "HOLY SH*T MY RETINAS!" part! |
Greenhemoglobin chapter 1 . 12/4/2009 0.0...0o0...0u0...XD the end |
empty-phaser chapter 1 . 12/3/2009 holy snapple juice that was funny XD |
glancesherlock chapter 1 . 11/1/2009 Oh my... XD Wow, I'm almost with Bones on that last one but that was freakin' histerical. hahah, Leonard McCoy- moment killer My favorite is definately the baseball. "I did not see an aquatic bird." XD |
Mallie chapter 1 . 10/17/2009 'and Chekhov had a strange fear of hot water.' Huh? However I loved the story as a whole. All the crazy things Jim could convince Spock to do against his better judgement. Sky-diving? Ice skating? Baseball? I'd love to actually SEE some of these. |