| Reviews for Beautiful Stranger |
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PL16 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005 Ooh a fic about Benimaru and its not yaoi! YAH! _ hehe. Now then... (reads the fic) LOL, Benimaru thinks he's too pretty for the ladies (he blows a kiss to all the girls in Capcom Vs SNK 2, I wish I were those girls P). Ew O_o Benimaru smells like gasoline, I hate that smell. Hmm, Benimaru with his hair down would be lovely to see (he does that in Capcom Vs SNK 2, which I find kawaii and funny at the same time). I need to buy that game -_- or steal it from my big brother (I wouldn't do that but hmm... j/k). LMFAO, they needed Jesus XD oh my. Seeing Benimaru blush would definitely be a kawaii pic to take. Wow, Benimaru sounds awfully mean about the jealous hussies . She must indeed be a pretty lady :) and no offense taken because I am no Kensou fan and never will be. Hehe, well at least she's using her head about not getting down on the first night P. You had a couple of grammar mistakes but this fic is still wonderful! I enjoyed Benimaru's POV. It was very amusing. Hehe, good job with this. I plan to write my own Benimaru and someone (I'm not going to reveal the girl yet) fic someday and it'll probably be somewhere else instead of this site since I don't really like this place. |
Nbluju chapter 1 . 4/13/2005 FINALLY someone who doesn't make Benimaru gay wo! Anyways, I really liked your fic, it was so kawaii! |
Delores L chapter 1 . 1/6/2005 I could've signed in...but yeah, I'm too lazy-anyhow, this was great! Although I've got to addmit that I was envyous of that woman-BENIMARU IS MINE! Muahahahahahah! Ahem! Anyhow, this was good(because it had Benimaru in it, and there aren't many who write stories with Benimaru)! Keep up the good work, See ya later, peace! |
kristen chapter 1 . 3/29/2003 i liked this story it was cute_plus benimaru was in it...he iz oh so hot!~_ |
Pollensalta chapter 1 . 1/13/2002 I meant to review this the first time I ever read it but my computer was acting retarded and-*ahem* yeah. ;; I really like this story's premise; it was new and refreshing. Plus, it featured Benimaru. Keep it up! |
Monou Hakkai chapter 1 . 1/11/2002 This is the first Benimaru fanfic I've read. It's really good and you should continue it - unless it was just a one off chapter. benimaru is a gorgeous guy :D! |
davidcheone chapter 1 . 1/10/2002 hahahahahahhahhahaha this is so fuNNY! |