Okay, I'm on chapter 5 right now... and this story is REALLY good. I already feel like I know Amy, with the way you've dexcribed her, and I already HATE William. With passion. I'm going to keep reading... can't wait unti the Cullens come in!

I noticed that you haven't updated in a while and just now read your entire story 3

Can't wait till next chapter!

Good Work.

Im soo sorry but this may sound mean, ive been waiting forever for you to write a chapter and im starting to give up :(. This story is really good so dont give up, its just i check it everyday, and everyday its the same, no more chapters. so please do it for me write soom more!1 Thanks sooo much! Gracie8290

this was fantastic, the description and the way you set the scene was amazing. :D

I'm a bit confused here. Is Amy Seth's imprint? Does that mean that there will be a bit of romance between them? I was thinking that until you introduced Joshua. Does that mean there will be some romance between Amy and Joshua? Can you please reply to this review so that it is cleared up. Thank you.

Other than that, I really like Joshua's character! He's not like any of the other guys, he's different. I don't think your story is choppy at all! I really like it. No I LOVE it! You have brilliant writing skills, they are far better than mine. Your story is AMAZING! If it was my work, I would be more than proud of it! :)

Please keep writeing!

Good chapter, even though William scares me half to death...

the chapter is fine the way it is. It's not to long at all. Also, I don't feel it's necessary to add the bit about William actually drinking the girl's blood. We get the point, unless of course you want to delve into William's sadistic nature, and you think the audience absolutely needs to know that...

Definitely start off the next chapter will William, Christian, and the vision!

xJadeRainx

I like Josh just fine. He seems nice!

xJadeRainx

This chapter was amazing. It was the perfect size. There were a few errors but mainly just missing spaces. I think it should go back to Amy in the next chapter :):) I hope you don't get to sick of me reviewing but this is one of my favourite stories

you should put the cullens in and stuff

I love this story! Please update soon!

UPDATES! WILLIAM! EEEEEEEE!

Ahem...Now that the fangirl squeal is out of the way...

TIME TO GET REVIEWIN'!

Well, as for the questions you asked in chapter 13:

1. I like Joshua! He's just a nice guy, y'know? I'd flesh him out a tad, as I can't quite see if he's nerdy, or kind of angsty, or such... But that'll come in time, he's only been in a couple of chapters. But yes, he's got a crush on Amy! How sweet! It'll be interesting, what with the imprinting situation, I wanna see a fight! :) (Haha, sorry, you know me, violent.)

2. Flow...haha. XD Anywhozitz, it's flowing quite nicely. I sense no choppage in the flowy river of worditude.

, you did 14, so we're all good!

Also, about chapter 13, Ms.C. She reminds me of Schaefer... And I totally cracked up about "the monkeys paw"...If only you could type words with the british-y accent!

As for chapter 14:

...Did I ever mention how much I freaking love William? Like, really. Really really. And you let him eat this time! I'm so happy! :D

1. No, the chapter was not to long, it flowed like a babbling willi-yum-y river... That sounds...innapropriate... But no, it was a good length!

2. Hehe, a couple. Mostly just you forgetting to hit the space bar. :)

3. In my opinion, yes. Because it would make me happy. XD

4. Hmmm...That is the grand question, isn't it? It's up to you man, but you already know my vote. :3

YES, YES. ALL IN ALL, GOOD SHOW! Keep up the good work, friend!

P.S. (Christian is still, and forever will be, british.)

i love it! But i have one request, there hasnt been much of jacob or the wolves or renesmee i think u need more of them. i like joshuas charecter alot and i think its just what the story needed. it is a good filler chapter and it has reall nice details and it wasn't choppy.

great job!

I think that you are way to hard on yourself. I love this story, it is simply amazing. Keep up the awesome work. Also Josh seems like a really sweet kid and yes another chapter about William and Christian. P.S. I love William he seems like he isn't all bad :)