The story was very confusing:/

I just got done reading your story and though i feel it was left unfinished I must say that it is by far the BEST story i have read on here. Thank you.

The redo wish was really cool! It was interesting to see the alternate world and how she got the first one back (:

This is an incredibly fascinating read! You did an amazing job with timing (and timelines) and showing character development through small vignettes over a long period of time. The plot was also incredibly well put together and coherent, even though it was published over a long period of time (from what I can see).

I'm glad that you didn't end up pulling down all of your stories, and I hope this review gets to you someday.

Please don't take your stories down. It is true that some authors aren't the best at writing their stories, but you are good at writing and I for one enjoy your stories, Please let me and others continue to enjoy your writing.

Ah, I am glad that I got to read your story, though from your authors note I suppose it was meant to be taken down. I did truly enjoy it, and I hope to find you on other sites, you should try Dokuga, if you want a site that you won't get a virus from. It is one of the best Sess/Kag sites that I have found. Also no matter where you go there will always be authors who write abysmally, mainly because they are young, and as they get older, hopefully, the quality of their stories will get better. Trust me on that one, I started writing when I was 13 and am now 26 and the quality of my work is still improving. I hope that you get this review.

Any way, I greatly enjoyed this story, the only thing I wish to know is if they eventually had children.

I wanted to let you know this is my all time favorite story, no it didn't have the fairy tail ending but the right ending. It thought a lesson in the end. and it was an amazing story. I never really read any storied labeled angst, but this one caught my attention and kept it. I'll be passing this one on to my friend that read on here. you're an amazing writer, so keep it up :)

Your bio claims that you were going to remove your stories because of something about viruses through popups on this site, so even though that was over a year ago, I don't know that you'll actually get your reviews (except maybe in email). But I wanted to say something, anyway.

First, I myself don't get any popups from FF.N. That could be because I have Firefox, or it could be a different reason. Second, its true that the quality of the majority of stories on this site aren't very good. But, that is true for pretty much anywhere online. It all depends on where the awesome writers are posting, or if RL is even letting them write for fun.

And last, is about the story. For all the complaints about "these writers thinking grammar, spelling, plot, etc are optional", this story itself is rather lacking. There are two other major things that a story really needs to be actually GOOD, instead of just "moderate" or "ok". Details, and Consistency. This story is lacking in both, I'm sorry to say. It has an absolutely awesome plot potential, but its like everything was rushed. The whole thing is just a vague summary, instead of detailed story, so far. It makes me sad for the wonderful plot that I see. And I'm actually half tempted to want to ghostwrite it, just to flesh it out so that its as awesome as it can be.

If you have continued writing since leaving the site, I hope that you have found yourself improving - I know from experience that noticing your style improve is highly satisfying.

I'm sorry but this story is not right.

First of all only Sango acted in a true manner to the canon. Kagome would not have given up her life so easily without at least one "Sit." command to Inuyasha.

Second, Miroku could have at least tried to use some sutras to immobilize Kikyo and Inuyasha to try and free Kagome. Where was Shippou?

I can not continue to read this story. It is just too far fetched for me.

I would love to get the addresses an your author name for any other sites you have your work on, I think you're a wonderful author. Please e-mail me,

A strange, yet very interesting story. Each chapter kept my interest. .

I don't know if you're getting this message, but I couldn't find you on Dokuga.

I loved this story! I am so sad to see you are done with fanfiction!

Please post something letting us know what new site you are transferring to please. Thank you!

Your story was wonderful! :]

I'm surprised at myself..I have never ever left a negative review ever..but today.I'm sad that this will be my first & only...

I feel bad that your lack of self confidence would cause you to turn to other writers that wish to continue writing learn in time to take bad reviews & blow them off. People who leave bad reviews seem to forget that they chose to read a story they didn't like themselves & should only complain to you so easily allow others to chase you from a site, I hate to say this but you will find, just as others who let negative people with no imagination chase them away that in the end no matter where you write you have to learn to accept good reviews with grace, petty reviews you'll see only come from those who are petty people & need to be ignored