| Reviews for Melted Steel |
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MegamiHana chapter 3 . 7/17 ¡Hola! Esta historia va realmente bien, me tiene emocionada y con curiosidad. Me gusta mucho el manejo en las personalidades que has tenido hasta ahora, aunque me habria gustado ver un poco mas de interacción, son muchos y hemos visto la intervención de muy pocos. Los de Neji y Tenten me parece dulce (si, comicamente) y estoy ansiosa por ver cómo los vas a desarrollar mas adelante. Saludos y abrazos |
Ten chapter 20 . 1/1 This story is so beautiful. I've read it so many times and I never get tired of it. It's truly a great story and beautifully written. I know it's been years but I hoped that you get to posting an epilogue :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2018 First off, lemme tell you: you are an amazing writer and I love the way you explained that dream. It was so intense and thrilling. You write so we'll, KEEP UP THE BEAUTIFUL WORK! |
Bel Yan chapter 20 . 12/24/2016 Wow! This is EPIC! You are sooooo AMAZING. Great job! ;D I'm looking forward to that epilogue. Pretty pleeeeease XD |
TabooTwo chapter 20 . 12/18/2016 Wow! This story was so well thought out it should actually be made into a movie. I loved it! |
TabooTwo chapter 4 . 12/14/2016 The ending of chapter 4 was perfect! Neji is probably devastated and he still hasn't come to terms with his feelings. Sasuke though... That shocked me. He clearly acted out of his emotions towards TenTen but I think TenTen only reciprocated to cover up his mistake. Can't wait to read on :) |
Milchzahn chapter 20 . 5/2/2016 Wow, I think of all the fan fiction authors I know that write about my favourite paring, you are the best. You have a very intriguing writing style, amazing character developments and great repertoire of words! I loved the way you made Tenten a wonderful, strong, awesome character! Seriously, they should developed your ideas into a manga and anime series! I'd much rather read them and with love eradicate the last couple hundred chapters of Naruto I read. Did you ever think about writing your own stories? I'd love to read them! Please tell me when you do, you are an amazing author 3 thanks for making my rainy day enjoyable and the long train ride go by in the blink of an eye :) Milchzahn |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/27/2016 NEJI IS JELLY NEJI IS JELLY NEJI IS JELLY NEJI IS JELLY |
Rose-Aki chapter 20 . 1/13/2016 It took me a while to read your whole story, but it was really worth it. The way you described Tenten and especially Neji was amazing. You are a really talented writer. I know it' s been a while since you wrote this story, but I still hope you write the epilogue to it when you have time :) |
AwesomeNinja101 chapter 11 . 6/3/2015 Omg! This is tots awesome. I haven't read it all, but I can tell this is gonna be great. Can not wait to read the rest. Love it |
AwesomeNinja101 chapter 3 . 6/2/2015 This is totally one of my favorite fan fics which is speaking all lot since I have read many. Anyways, the plot is interesting and I love the characters. Recommend it to anyone who loves Naruto (the anime, not the character :) |
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Interesting start! Can't wait to read the rest! :D |
Sayori Hollyhood chapter 20 . 2/10/2015 Great job. This was a even better read the second time around. Thanks for finally finishing this. S. Hollyhood |
BurningAkira97 chapter 20 . 1/8/2015 God this was... I just cant describe how amazing this story is! :') you are brilliant |
RaiNiccle chapter 19 . 6/27/2014 This is such a beautiful and perfectly written story gaaah its coming to an end T_T but this is so amazing |