Awww! I really really like the idea of them having a family. It's not like they're frozen as teenagers. Thank you for this.

I love this fic, is so funny and relaxing to read~

Thanks a lot ;)

this is a very warmhearted one. thanks for such a wonderful story

aww...so cute!

Aw, that was so so sweet! I loved it. FATE-PAPA! Lol. Thanks for that, it really made my day.

nice I LIKE it _ its sweet make more

Aw! That was so cute! _

Added to favorites! And i love the analogy of how Nanoha associates herself with the rain, and what it means. Great fic!

so lovely! i hope u continue :)

Cute chapter.

Aww - a huge aww! :) Vivio's perspective is fantastic in this story (all the spellings made me laugh - she's really bright for her age!) Thanks for a great story.

You really did a great job on this. I love the point of view in this. Also the rain was a good idea. Can't wait for part two. Keep up the great work

Oh so you used the song from “You Make Me Melt” here as well. My memory is still intact.

Strange, I don’t have anything to blame about your sleeping state while writing this story, maybe a few misspelled words here and there, but as you have said, we’re looking everything from the eyes of a child, so is natural to found these “mistakes” as some have pointed out. By the way, my favorite line of this chapter definitively was this one “And like most superheroes, my papa had a weakness… my mama.” priceless line from her.

Being afraid of losing your parents love to their unborn was the best to place Vivio’s insecurities on the surface. Poor child, she has known love from the moment Nanoha and Fate came to her life, and now with the idea of sharing of losing that “love” to their biological child can easily crush her feelings. They need to talk about it obviously, and maybe after that, our beloved Vivio can be at easy.

Oh Fate-chan, don’t mess with The White Devil mood swings now that she’s pregnant or else you’ll left orphan two children.

Lol aw, that was a really sweet story. I can see the effort you put in it, but I really wish you wouldn't push yourself so much. I worry about you, and you know that. .-.

I can actually tell how tired you are... "way" for "why", good job. ;D

Anyways, just wanted to drop in and say I found it really cute. And before I forget, that little bit with the rain, lightning and thunder was a nice touch.

Which brings me to another thing... why is that the less sleep you get... the softer your writing becomes? 0.o; Don't think I haven't noticed this~

that was an awesome one shot from vivio's point of view! i really enjoyed it! got some angst of sharing a parent when a new baby comes along. vivio matured pretty quickly in this one shot...how old is she suppose to be? haa i think the new baby will be more of a pain for vivio...cuz she got's to do the babysitting...not playing ;P

It's been a while since I've reviewed. Gah, I'm so sorry I can't go online anymore. Anyway,

Wow, XD Very Yuki-like style of writing. :3 Nanoha is the thunder, when she's mad DD and if the thunder comes, it means Fate-mama has done something wrong to Nanoha-mama. XD I can't really say anything, as awesome as it has always been. DD

Thank you for this awesome NanoFate fluff 3