I read the story because you're part of the army, i liked it and i dont regret it ;)

Awww...

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wow. amazing story. i love it

Now that is more to my liking than the first part

Nicer end. Definitely.

Love the pairing, there's too little fanwork for it

One question: Are Prop and Scip gay in this story? Cuz if they are...YOUR NUTS!

SOMETHINGS WRONG WITH YOUR BRAIN!

3 good job! I LOVVED IT ;)

I would like it if you did it a little longer and a bit explaining. I also Have a tip which you would find useful. All my fave authors use it. But I will need to know some answers first. Which character is it? What time of day? what year month and date? I think it will eventually blossom when it is finished. Please read my one. I will give you a basic tip for each one when you give me the answers I need and the basic one will be a draft and I will expand it. Please write back. Good Luck!

-Renesmee1

And then...?

So far so good! I like the mood. Will you please continue? I'm really interested in how this turns out!

Hey, I stumbeled over your story because I had been in holidays and couldn't use my computer. But I actually wanted to say that the beginning sounds really great. I can't wait for the next chapters. I hope you write soon.