Nooooooooooo ;-;

Oh my god. Perfectly written and perfectly executed. You put weight into every word, and for that, this is going into my favourites.

Oh my god. Perfectly written and perfectly executed. You put weight into every word, and for that, this is going into my favourites.

*sniff* he was just a boy! Damn you Paolo i will avenge his death! I actualy whispered 'no' when I finished. The thought occured to me also but I felt like such a morbid freak for thinking of writing it but you do it amazingly. kudos!

Yes, this occurred to me, too, when the game was ending. I never thought to write it down, though, and your version is really good, and really powerful and emotional. I really liked it, even though it made me sad. :')

ps. Sorry I'm so late! Didn't join the website til about last week or before.

You've broken my heart. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY.

...This story is amazingly powerful for its length. I admire your talent, but at the same time it may take me a while to stop shaking. Which only makes me admire your talent more, but still!

Aha! So I wasn't the only one who thought of this possibility. I've often wondered if Luke almost died before he got out of the tower.

Oh no, you killed Luke! You bastard

I-I actually had to read that through a couple times before it sunk in... Y-you killed off Luke! Why ;_;

OMG LUKE! *mourns over picture of Luke* WHY DIDN'T THE PROFESSOR MAKE SURE YOU WERE SAFE BEFORE HE PLAYED SUPER HER AND JUMPED OFF THE BUOLIND! TTOTT

Ohmygosh that's exctly what I imagined!XD awesome n sad and it was just great! Might do a raponse sometime...I seriously thought that happened at the end for a second, wow really you read my mind!awesome!XD

Woah. I think this is particularly powerful because it's so short. Great job on pushing our "NO~!" buttons XD

NO! LUUKE!

Well written! Well done, good idea! Poor Luke...

You should of got Layton to go "NO!" at the end! Joking, joking!