oh wow!

Great story I loved it! :)

Actually...who like alvin,I mean Jeanette or Brittany?it a bit confusing,,...

Awww. I was hoping that would be longer!

This sucked !

Awe. This one, & the one where Alvin Kissed brittany are my favorite ! You dont have to write a sequel, juat write another story .

once again my friend, amazing writing!3 totaly. hehe. keep it up girly! :D

please can't u do more i relly like the last and that before the last one :P;D

although i'm ususally all for cheating,i like it.i was never really in to mix relationships nice ending!

Ahh!

I like how you ended it lol.

I kinda knew from the last story SOMETHING had to be up with that. He wouldnt kiss her to prove a point. well.. he would..

But I knew he liked her haha.

Aw. I feel bad for Elly. That'd probly be hard.

And You should def just make this a full story and write about how britt n alvin try to find it and Elly finds out lol.

But if you dont, which I would understand lol. I hope to hear from you soon :]

I like your stories.