Damn man this is an epic battle u created! Good job my friend and thanx for the pairing of LuHa (LuffyxHancock). _

The dialogue is hard to follow. But it's good. Very.

I used thier names over and over so no one got lost in who did what cause people do. He hit his hand on his he him that they he- get it?

As for the achohal, I know that, the bottel wasn't clear and you couldn't see in it, like the sake bottle Shanks brought to white beard.

The fight scenes were quite good maybe a little boring,and when 2 people are fighting don't use their names again and again cause everyone knows who your talking about anyway and it's a little annoying but not a big problem really.

BTW Vodka and Whisky look quite different Vodka is clear like water just like Gin, Tequila and white rum while whisky is a darker golden, yellow like color.