Reviews for The Bella Swan Guide to Getting Your Life Back |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was going to be more then 1 question .. Keep up the good work! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() It's doubtful you'll ever continue the story. However if you do you should fix some plot mistakes you did while writing. When Jasper and Bella meet for the second time in the bar, he waits till the end of her shift, follows her home on foot and they talk. Next chapter you continue their conversation but suddenly they're back in the bar and when they split he leaves in a car and she continues her work. When they're in Ireland they get the Cullens address on their first day there. Liam just tells them that he talked to Carlisle on the p phone and after a short conversation he gives Jasper the address. But in the next chapter there's a scene where Liam is looking for Cullen's address in some book and gives it to Jasper AGAIN. There were some other mishaps like Bella's graduation -she was supposed to graduate earlier around Christmas and leave for England without waiting for the official graduation at the end of the school year but then it seemed that she graduated normally. The slow burn between Jasper and Bella is also a bit too slow. You wanted her snarky but the way she constantly responds negatively to Jasper it doesn't leave much room for romance |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooohhh..this is good! Please come back! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you continuing? xXx |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't take down. someone might appreciate that it is here and like to read it, LIKE ME. FRICKING know it all a-hole reviewer |
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![]() ![]() Really...six years and no update..either finish or take down... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Might wanna fix this " Was I really that indispensable?" - indispensable means absolutely necessary, I think you meant disposable or something similar. Just to let you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, that is one unhealthy relationship where Bella seems to have no sense of self outside of Edward... it's one of the reasons I absolutely cannot stand that pairing. Good of you to, as it seems, wake her the hell up to reality in the coming chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to finish this? it would be great if ya did! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi can u tell me if u will be updating this story ever again? Or is it done with? Such a shame as I was enjoying it and its been along time since it was updated? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good chapter as well and yes i am glad you didn't give up this story. So Bella wants to stand on her own two feet, but I think Maggie knows that Jasper and Bella are true mates that is why the comment right. Well I do hope they find the answers that they are looking for right thank you and have a good week . Oh yeah it is good that they are getting to know each other through this trip right and hopefully Bella has her job yet when she gets back to London right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this was a good chapter as well and I'm glad that the coven liked Bella right. Now they get answers and so does Bella with her questions right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow so Bella is going to be put back to where she was before and she doesn;t even want to see them again that isn;'t fair to her now is it. |