A fitting example of what could have been a great fic. This is really good. i love how you managed to write the chemistry between kamina and yoko so beautifully. a shame that you didn't continue this. but if you do, somehow, continue this fic, i look forward to it

Really nicely written work! I liked it and I liked the story, especially the first parts. I think you portrayed both characters very well.
When I saw the Stars video, I was actually really disappointed that Kamina appeared for like 1 second. But you found it inspiring instead! That's admirable. Thank you very much for writing this and sharing your work

I really like what you did here. They're in a completely situation but I can still recognize all of the characters by their actions. Congrats, it's sometimes hard to do to keep characters so true to themselves. I love the chemistry you have between Kamina and Yoko, and I do truly care about these two. That's the greatest achievement any author can make. Great Job! :D Keep it up in whatever or whenever you're doing now. Be Safe and Well.

This was amazing, its sad that you let it die, but well, i dont blame you, writing is hard, as much as keeping a story when the hype of the anime died as well, but if you read this, that i doubt it, just tell you that you have potential!

i wish you had finished this story. it was just getting warmed up! really great start though

I know it has been quite a while since you have updated, but can you, pleeeeaaase

awww, that was so cute, and sexy too. Damn Kamina is one fine man, yoko is a lucky woman.

whooo, looking good so far. A nice rounded start to what looks like its going to a great story.

Where are you! This amazing story needs another chapter! COME BACK FROM THE ENDS OF THE EARTH AND WRITE!

Is there more? After Chap. 5? XD

Now, I very well know you have not updated this in years but I could not help myself but reveiw. First off I freaking love this story. Everything was great; from Yoko and Kamina to the little cameos of other characters. I know how stories can be; I have abandoned my fair share (more like notebooks full) of stories. Despite the time gap, I'm hoping someday you will come back to it! Maybe its my fault for getting into Gurren Lagann so late but I hope one day your muse will lead you to this story again

omg! i love it. please update soon! i really cant wait to see what happens next! :)

i like this. XD yoko as the counter girl reminds me of that S.T.A.R.S. video. i like how this is

Wah I love this story so far! I really hope you update soon!

love the story! I was looking for a good AU, and your fic showed up right when I needed it. :D awesome. love all the little details like Kamina's coat and the car~ :D