Cute~ XD I love how Arche accused Chester of throwing an apple... And wow, Chester really is dense...

Anyway, cute little story~

~Ayame~

I haven't played the game either, but I just got to see the anime yesterday and that got me on a Chester/Arche mood X3 dream talking...heeheehee!

The tense changes a lot in this well, I'm not sure what tense you're going for, so it makes it hard to read. Check verb conjugation ie~ 'The pink haired girl don't want to' should be 'doesn't' for present tense or 'didn't' for past tense and 'magician scold herself' should be 'scolds' for present or 'scolded' if past

Other than some words being off like that, it was an enjoyable little scene, I was wondering about him looking very elf-like too!

I'd say go for script format if you want...I was hesitant about joining here because the rules say no scripts, which is what I write the most. Then I did a search here and found lots of script format stories, so if they're doing okay here, I figured I'd put mine up too, and I haven't had a problem with them up yet!