malefor difnt die a first time he only got sealed in the core

Wow! I just finished reading all of your trilogy, and wow! Your story is the 2nd best Spyro story I have read yet! (I have compleatly read through at least 50 Spyro stories so that is impresive!) And your story is the only one with a human in it that I like. Once I started reading I could not put it down. I started this morning (the first book) and ended about 7. (I did do other things than read though so I cant say I didnt put it down.) So once again very good job! (In case your wondering my number one is The Legend of Spyro Age of Heroes 'trilogy'.

The storm is a combinaton of all the elements, the Wind blows hard, the Poisonous rain burns, thunder strikes Fear into the heart of thousands, Shadows and Darkness are cast upon the land, Ice and hail rain from above, Earth responds to skys above, Lightnig strikes and Plazma flows, Light blinds and amazes those below, in lightning power from a diferent plane Convexety ends all. (My saying with additions to cover all of your elements, except crystal.

Perfect ending. and rather touching. you gave my OC a great form of Honor as i would see him having. and yes a warrior should be buried with his weapon. May you grace this site with more of your writings.

*sniff* aww so sad story.. BUt it was good story. Pls, make more spyro stories. And come look mine's too when I make one. 3

That was an appropriate ending for a guy like Rayde. Very well done. I know that with your mind, that prequel will be out in no time at all. I also have one question to ask in regards to him. Can I use him in my fic The Power Within? If you need details on how I will, then PM me and I'll give you details on how I will get him in there. :)

-Ultima

First thing: OH NO WHY RAYDE (sad face)

Second thing: Can't wait for the prequal... START WRITING RIGHT NOW! loljk. yours truly...

~MendedDragon

*sniff* That was so sad. He kinda knew this was happeing...

AH CRAP! I kinda had a feeling that this, or something similar to this, would happen, but I still hoped that it wouldn't. :( I do and don't like the ending (if that makes any sense at all). I wonder what you'll write next?

-Ultima

PLS, BE HAPPY ENDING. PLS, BE HAPPY ENDING. PLS! 3

This was a good chapter. I wonder what this new ability is that Rayde was talking about. If I know what it is already, then I've forgotten but I still can't help but wonder. Keep it up! :)

-Ultima

Good so far. CONTINUE! PLSS! D

Well that was a fairly good battle for Hunter, leave all the focus on Spyro, Rayde, and Cynder right? That's what it's starting to look like. Keep it up! :)

-Ultima

it was short but hey got to have short chapters with excrusiating long chapters. but any ways nice chapter.

perfect i was not expecting you to bring Drome back from the dead. that was perfect and the Golem also unexpected but... what about the Destroyer?

Well, I knew it would come sooner or later. I hope the next few chapters will be good, cuz I really like this story! Keep it up!

-Ultima