Reviews for McSmokey
AWW chapter 1 . 9/4
*puberty and asthma (stupid autocorrect)
AWW chapter 1 . 9/4
This was sweet,can't tell if it was sightly cracky or if that's just how fangirl-Sakura-with-some-essence-of-a-brain-and-going-through-povert is...:p
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
LOVE IIIIITTTT!
Cassandra Echizen chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
Hahahahhhh sweeeet
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Hahahaha lol ;)
notyeraveragenerd chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
She sounded a lot like Karin hahaha.

It's cute tho. Thank you for writing :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
Lol :D loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Very good... Your writing style is very good and professional... You should do it more often.
Kiiki chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Girl! You are AMAZING x TEN!
ellz chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
lol
ImpossibleHumanParadise chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
That was so cool. I loved the last bit, with the 2 tubes of toothpaste. Cool. Hey, if you have time and want, can u please check out my what if story? I would really like the opinion of such a good author. Please?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Lolz. I hope i get to have my non-smoking prince charming that easy though. Ecckk! I hate smokes too :/
TigerLilyette chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
oooooh I liike lol(;

very cute(;
What I wrote chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is amusing xD could be longer, though. Wouldn't have minded that at all ;-)
tifapunchqueen chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
This is genius XDD

very hilarious

I love it
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