It's 2020, and although the OG writers must have already outgrown Fanfiction, this still deserves a review even after 11 years. Awesome story, awesome plot! Really loved it! I hope you're doing fine, author-san.

When life gets you down, please remember these stories you wrote that was gushed over and loved by fans worldwide. For what it's worth, I hope you're living your best life right now, as an awesome human being who wrote this. No one can dispute that we were once creative upstarts, and hopefully, continue to be until this very moment. Much love from South-East Asia!

BEAUTIFUL STORY! WELL WRITTEN, GOO- I MEAN GREAT CHARACTERIZATION. HANDS DOWN!

I LOVE YOUR WORKSSS AND I LOVE YOU JIKAGE-SAMA1827!

your fics rekindle my love for the fandom and pairingI know it's been years but I hope you find the time and the drive to complete your stories! They're too wonderful to be left hanging!

Thank you for writing, you are a God sent

I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! THANK YOU!

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Fishbird?! I love this story! I could already feel all of their personality it just wow! Never expected that ending especially the extra. Oh hibari san... now where's the doujinshi for this marvelous fanfic! Someone like an illustrator should make a complete doujinshi for this its perfect! Unless you didn't want to but its a shame... I fallen in love.. I'm a r27 but 1827 is not bad

Beautiful story, it made me cry around the middle! The sibling idea was amazing, overall great story! .

I'm in love.

actually cries because it's been 6 years since this fic was made, but i honestly think it is still among the best (if not the actual best) 1827 fics i've ever read. it's absolutely amazing and lovely. frankly, it was so well-written, and i loved every second of it **

Hello! I didnt read how this story was before so I cant compare, but from what I read right now I can say that this is great. Very well written. Your characters weren't OOC, not one bit; you are very good with the dialogue; and the aspect that I likes the more is the intricate quality of your pacing. It's amazing.
The emothions flowed in this story. I felt restless wondering if Tsuna and Hibari would end up bad, happy at the development of their interaction, worried at the misunderstanding (if that is the appropriated word), fascinated at the inner growth and so much more. The best of it all is that while the focus was on the couple, the rest of the world still existed - you showed the family interaction, the friends, the acquaintances...
The part the deserve the more praises, for me, is the interlude when IPin, Lambo and Tsuna are waiting for the train. This might be a weird part to be the readers favorite, but it was placed so well, at the middle of the conflict; and it is a happening that is strong enough to break the main plot and still be interesting. That part, for me, proves the quality of your writing.
And then, after everything was resolved, the last scene, when Tsuna realizes that Hibari jumped the roof just because!, made me lighthearted. It was a good choice for an ending in a fic full of internal drama like this.
Well, now that I rambled on and on about all this awesomeness, my suggestions for this fic are the following: Dino's role needs to be better explained, like, who is he? How can he has his men? Is he at the mafia in this fic? Does the mafia exists in the characters life in this fic? Gokudera still calls Tsuna juudaime after all (well, to be truthfull I also cant see Gokudera calling him anything but, haha). For how long has Hibari been treating Tsuna differently?... Ugh, that is all that I can think that might be useful, sorry.
Once again, an awesome reading! Thanks for posting it!
(sorry for grammar mistakes, I'm still trying to learn this right!)

hahah wow. that was a cute story! and the whole older sibling thing grew on me...though in the beginning when it said I-pin was bouncing Tsuna on her lap I was kinda confused :)

Cute, totally cute! This was friggin adorable!

The folk tale was really neat parallel to the story

The ending is hilarious though XD
And they're so cuteeee, fishbird is actually really cute too XD
Thanks for the fluff and cuteness 33

Oh my God... this is just too much... too great for words, really, thanks for writing this! it almost made me cry...XD

Happy Ending