I like where this is going :D
And do you mean Louise from Zero no Tsukaima? :D

great story can't wait for the 2nd chapter...

the only thing bugging me is that got a really hard time reading you story because, no offense, but i think you're english was a bit rusty... i kinda had a hard time reading it but i understood the story, if you could have worked more on your english the story could have been perfect...

still two thumbs up for the story... i suggest for the 2nd chapter tell a story more for the young couple and put a part where maybe yoshida will accept the new couple or maybe she will feel angry towards them? just an idea...

congrats for your 1st fic, i think you were just nervous writing this, that's why you had a lot of grammar mistakes.. P

yo could u write more it sounded interesting than all the other out

Hey how about the chapter 2,u can write about kazumi dating Ike and Shana,Yuji and Kazumi meeting each other.

wo this is the best shakugan no shana fan fic i've ever red keep up the good work thumbs up.

Wow! i personally think this one of the good Shakugan no Shana fanfics that I've read because not a lot of stories can really capture the esscense of the characters. It's great! Can't wait for you to update!

Hey this is good for your first fanfic! *thumbs up and write more! XD