A very decent piece of writing and the best thing about your fan fiction was that you very accurately depicted their characters. No emotional prolonged bullshit which is very out of place in their relation with each other. Post more sometime

dats good

Aw, you've just gotta love Mustang's reaction to... well, just about everything.

Nice story.

Nice work!

I really love the way you wrote Havoc and Hawkeye's friendship. It was spot on.

AND thinking about it... Aerugo sounds an AWFUL lot like "Aragon". :D So you made the Spain nerd in my happy and would you mind if Aerugo comes up in my story if I made Aerugo like Spanish culture? (I'm more of foodie in my descriptions of countries in the FMA world... Havoc likes to eat. So do I. So Creta has "Greek food" and the region of Aquroya seems a lot like Venice to me.)

Aww, so cute! I love jealous!Roy.

That was cute! You did a good job with Havoc!

Ah, cute. I love Havoc-Hawkeye friendship. XD

Aw. I love Havoc/Hawkeye friendship moments :)

Cleaning is a weird time to get ideas like this, but the idea was wonderful. It was sweet.