Interesting, good job

Basically what I thought Tick would be thinking.

Poor Tick. I cried when I read that part of the book. She really isn't appreciated in fanfics enough. Well done

Wow... Thats really good. Very sad, and that last line was chilling. Fantastic.

could be more descriptive, because i was not as sad as i thought i would be, but i shed a tear, and thats what counts.

Aww, poor Tick... I have to say, there was a fair amount of repetition in this, but the roaches normally do repeat themselves. Besides, on the last word...(*shivers*) That stung at me. I wasn't expecting Tick to be so melancholy and accepting and...well, I just wasn't expecting that to come after so much determination to keep the princess safe. Quite honestly, you've done a great job on this.

Aw, I actually like this... poor Tick. I'm guessing this is pretty hard to write because you have to write a cockroach's thoughts, and they speak as well as humans (obviously), but this is really nice and sad...

Sniffle. Poor Tick.

You did a good job writing the way a crawler would think. :D

Aw, that was actually really good. Sad, but good.

Aw, this is so sad, Prophe! It was really well-written and I liked how you used their phrasing for English. Good job!