Reviews for Death would have been easier |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. More pwease! |
![]() ![]() Seriously. Try reading a book before you write. |
![]() ![]() i love this story! it's so interesting u should totally continue it plz plz plz plz :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most confusing sess/kag body switch I've ever read. I wish I could remember the name of one what has his beast talk to Kagome while she's in her body so you could read it to get ideas on how to make it less confusing but sadly I don't. I only remember the plot. It was a REALLY good story. To make it simpler you should change it from saying the name of who's body is speaking to what person is speaking. BTW the G-spot is NOT where you said it was. She would NOT be a virgin if he had been hitting it. Actually that whole scene was confusing from their inner selves taking over like that to what you were trying to get them to do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an excellent chapter to read, it was simply amazing. Thank you for the link to this chapter it was truly appreciated. I am looking forward to your next update with a lot of anticipation. Thanks again for the link, it was an excellent read. ~Tsukiyomi No Miko~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH my O/O u make me blush xD those were some nice little lemons u have there lmfao also i think the story line is really original, i like it lots _ plus it's quite hilarious XD please update as soon as u can, later! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I love this story. It is well done and it keeps your attention. I laughed so hard when i started reading this story. I love it and can't wait to see more... great job and update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find this really amusing but i think you need to clear up which one is talking, in the first few chapters. you have kag/sess mix up issues. though i think its funny the idea its confusing. other wise i think this has real potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an excellent chapter to read, it was simply amazing. Thank you for the link to this chapter it was truly appreciated. I am looking forward to your next update with a lot of anticipation. Thanks again for the link, it was an excellent read. ~Tsukiyomi No Miko~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a great chapter the conversation with the beast is going to bug Sess alot. Kagome gets along with the beast better then he does :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol this is good. keep it up u have the start of a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant wate tell bath time lol thats going to cost truble |