Wow nice story, You have a good hold of Sheppard & the rest of the team. Thanks 4 writing it. 3ed it

nice story

sounds like sheppard got very lucky in the end :)

I really enjoyed this story and read the one with the art work, which was also very good!

Nice Shep whump, would love to have seen this made into an episode - would've been interesting to see how a member of the Atlantis Expedition copes with being a runner.

Well done! Looking forward to future episodes (:

This was a very good story. I absolutely loved it. Very well written and compelling. I hope you have a follow up to it. It would be nice to see how the relationship/friendship between John and Jordanaeh develops.