Im liking this. Awesome start.

What a phenomenal chapter. First of all, I love how Rosalie is a cop - awesome :)

I love how you incorporated Dr. King's 'I Have A Dream' speech into this chapter. Not only in the context he meant but also in the form of Bella's sexual dream, LOL.

I found you set up the characters perfectly. I like to think of Bella as Sargeant Sarah Brown from 'Guys and Dolls' heading up her own 'save-a-souls mission' but with a much stornger personality (which I love.)

Edward's professionalism was written brilliantly and I loved how we got a look into his job and what it entails.

I cannot wait to read more :)

Wow very intriguing start and your writing is fantastic! I wonder who this 'deranged man/childhood friend' is? On to the next chapter :)

Awesome Baby! So much detail and I can tell you really have a lot planned!

update soon!

Great story so far.

Cool start. Your story sounds like it has potential. Can't wait to see what you do next.

I'm intrigued! lol... Looking forward to more :)

~Alley~