Damn my poor heart keeped on pounding as I read this chapter! It's just like how my heart beats really fast when I play a video game .

nononononoNONONO NO NO DON'T DO IT STOP HE'S SICK JUST LEAVE THE BOY ALONE

I'm glad you continued the story. It's been awhile since I checked it. Now it's complete. I'm going to enjoy this/ and now you've made me want to do a fan art with Leona hair up. Damn XP

Excellent! This was a very thorough and well thought out story. I really enjoyed the universe, which is saying something because aside from an odd Criminal Minds episode I'm not usually really that into cop/suspect drama. I can't wait to see how Leon/Cloud develop more in the sequel. Great work! Your writing and story telling skills are superb~

I forgot to tell you I also have a twin sister.

I can't believe it's over.

I wish I had seen Axel take the stand but that's alright I guess.

Omfg. Damn it Axel!

Oh shit, things aren't looking up for Axel. (:

Oh man I really hope Axel isn't the bad guy, I had my suspicious at first but I kept brushing them off.

I wonder what Riku means by distraction...

I'm really excited to read the next chap but that'll have to wait. I gotta catch some sleep.

O,O

OH MY FUCKING GOD! arR YOU FUCKING kidding ME?!
I HAVE NEVER, EVER READ SOMETHING AS REMOTELY AS AWESOME AS THIS!

The next chapter's bound to be interesting.