dont get it

Can i just say i read every chapter and i really love the way the story is going. you haven't posted any new chapters in like a year, but i really wish you would. as a fan of blood and chocolate as well, these chapters have inspired me to join this website and publish a work of my own; thank you for that. It's never too late to pick up where you left off!

i hope you finish

Her Broken Wings:

I read the most recent of your stories. I must say that despite the story’s shocking syntax and plot circling you did a pretty good job. I only mention this because the grammar and incorrect word usage caused some difficulty in the flow of the story. But, the difficult could be described as serene waters flowing over smooth boulders or an unexpected depression on path – something to stumble over, but nothing more. I am going to read your other two posting, as they are about two more of the favorite stories (Twilight and Peter Pan). If you overcome these small stepping stones I do believe that you will be a wonderful writer.

I will tell my friends about you.

Kristen/ MoonGuardianLuna

Oh my Gooshness! Please please please finish this story soon.

this is a good story. i cant wait to read more

hello, i love your story keep on writting

Okay this is about the question you asked, probably a while ago, but anyway... I can tell if a guy like a girl by the side comments. I think the guy likes you because you wouldn't a friend they're cute, would you? I wouldn't so I'm just assuming. I hope this is somewhat helpful and not comfusing.

Erica126

I love your story :)update whenever best for you!

Wow! How Old Are You, you are amazing!

Um, I just think that this attack was a little too fastly introduced into the story, i thought you could have built up the storyline abit more. I also think describing V's attack wounds and pain more in depth was necessary. And the fight should have been more difficult as this man was obvisouly wild and a good, experienced fighter so it should have taken a LOT to take him down,

BUT Great work!

This is the best one yet! Ive read the other ones and frankly they were rubbish. This is realistic, keeps the essence and personality of the characters Vivan and Gabriel. I like how G & V aren't all lovey dovey and not declaring their love for eachother, thats taky! I like how vivian is still independent despite being with G and theyre not all over eachother all the time but still capture their chemistry. Good Work!

i know how you feel with the school work ive been meaning to update my story but everytime i go to do so i get stuck with a huge project or asignment! cant wait till you post more!

hey, take your time and focus on school. thats what i'm doing right now too. i feel like i'm neglecting my story, but i'm just to busy for it. I understand completly. I look forward to the end of school so that I can finally finish mine, and i can finsih yours!

~ RiverOfSecrets

i like it but if i could read more that would help... ( make gabriel work for vivian) PLEASE continue the story...

i love it! but i have ben waiting forever for the next chapter...