Ha. Your's is pretty good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter...

I love it,can't wait until the next chapters.

I must admit, that this version of this fic is alot better and it is very interesting seeing how this is going to turn out.

All though it is a good story, I did spot a serious mistake, If I'm not mistaken you spelt Seifer's name wrong. I would normaly not worry bout telling people that they have made some mistakes, It is just that a characters name needs to b spelt properly.

Well i look forward to future chapters