So sad you did not continue. A very clever plot and engaging characters.

Please come back and finish this very interesting story.

Beautiful...my heart sanked.

I wish I hadn't wasted my time reading 24 chapters of an incomplete story with will never be complete.
I think that incomplete stories older than two years should be deleted.
Start with this one.

Just preposterous... not mean.
Silly .

Italicize dream sequences

There is some odd obsession with Americans depicting Uhura as a fragile thing needing protection.
May of the stories on this site are this way.

African women are raised to be strong and independent. There is no time for headaches or paralysis from hate mail.

Odd indeed!

Sweet. I guest she was not tall enough to smack Sarek.

Relax, the story is progressing. It bogged down in chapter 13, but it is ok. You mentioned the hotel and the audio book earlier in the story.

Nice move

I would say the story is starting to drag on too long. You need to add a resolution here.

Sintal wants to bring down Sarek using Ponn Farious Spock.

Bulll***t that affirmative action baby James Kirk got a commission of Captain before he graduated from the academy. Spock saved the earth, Kirk got the commission.
JJAbrams is a hack!

Depressing - get rid of T'Ping already.

I don't think it matters if you have the issues mentioned above. You are a fine writer.