I cannot help but bring up this point of critique, because it completely broke my immersion in the story:

If you start off at Nerima in the early morning and use the train, you'll arrive at the town of Aso just north of the mountain of the same name less than nine hours later. And there will be trains for the whole way. No need to switch modes of transport, only train lines.
Granted, today the Shinkansen line on Kyushu runs a bit longer than in the past. But even as soon as the late Seventies, there was already a line running all the way down to Fukuoka on Kyushu. Meaning the trip to Aso could have still been done within a single day.

Now it makes sense for the Society guys to take longer. They could not afford to take any of the fastest possible means of transport due to their need for secrecy after all. But for the rescuers to take over a week and then some, more than twice as long as the kidnappers who had to travel slower. That simply does not fit and utterly breaks continuity.

It was one of the best fanfic I ever read, I couldn’t get enough and couldn’t stop reading it. Thank you for your incredible story!

The best RanmaxRyoga story I have read.

Before I begin I would like it known and kept in mind that I thought it was was an excellent story. That said I cannot begin to describe the disappointment I faces when you sent the JPS after Ranma. Before that this story was shaping up to be an entirely different story and then it just veered off to the left. Oh well no used crying over spillt milk.

poor ryoga: he feels guilty so it's very difficult for him too

This looks good.

it really wasnt smart to restrain ranma considering she was strapped down and tortured for 3 weeks strait with little control that would make most people go hysterical

I don't even know if you'll see this. But wow, just wow.

My favorite Ranma fic!

Can't wait for the epilogue stuff!

This was nice. A little convoluted in parts and odd in others but still a fenomenal piece.
Kudos.

Horrible Pacing, lot of unessary clutter. The Villans are mostly boring. Also the Backstory were completely useless. Ranma has Mood swings so often that it is hard which emotion she has.
Also the Recure Arc had a boring Ending. Yukino never get in a real fight with Ranma or Ryoga.
I can not recommend this. Maybe later it get better but I’m done with it.

Beautiful

This was an amazing read and it took me to a whole new world! this caught me off guard with how good it was presented and I hope that you write more in the future!

That was an amazing read. Thank you for writing such a great story.

Glad I'm not as kind as Ran-chan.