Very nice read. I enjoyed it immensely. Gaara was intense and hot! More of this please!

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The intensity of Gaara's stare send shivers down my spine in excitement!

haha I loved Gaara's reaction to immediately noticing her and recognising her.. and the intensity just send shivers down my spine in excitement!

The fact that you are introducing other characters and their situations (like Shika and Temari) makes the story more complex and dimensional so I like it. Also, perfect re-introduction of Gaara.

I like how you've written the backstory of Hinata and her reasons to enter this contest.. you've summed it quote neatly and easy to understand. The whole Sasuke 'acting' and asking for her help felt OCC but I guess it was needed..

I really like the prologue setting..

I love the prologue! I can’t wait to read more. I think this my first story reading on Gaara x Hinata ship. But I’m excited!

They were so cute! I can’t wait for their re-meeting. (If that’s a word.)

This is the third fanfic I have read from you. I love the way you write, and your so creative with your story line.

That Shikamaru and Temari scene at the end broke my heart. So adorable!

And hearing Gaara's thoughts was wonderful - I love how you managed to balance the hidden tender side of him with his pragmatic intelligence.

This was a very intense and very sad chapter. Hang on, Gaara! Hinata will return!

Oooh, my sweet precious Hinata... damn it, I want to beat up everything in the world that might hurt you! Aaargh!

Hinata and Gaara's relationships is so awesomely beautiful and see... I can't wait to see it develop like a desert rose!

Awww. Poor Hinata. I ache for her, seeing how her compassionate heart is suffering from the situation with Shino!

Awww, I really love Hinata's friendship with Ino. I love women supporting each other!