| Reviews for The First Bite of the Apple |
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   poplar-kat chapter 12 . 10/5/2009 for waiting so long for this chapter i have to say this was worth wait! great chapter! |
| Duvet chapter 12 . 10/5/2009 Great story! Love it! Update ! :) |
| b416 chapter 12 . 10/5/2009 Hello Just wanted to let you know... I have really enjoyed your story. Thankyou Puddingstone |
| murgatroid-98 chapter 12 . 10/5/2009 Well, I guess justice is done. How could Luke think that Clara would go to him voluntarily? I guess he didn't or he would not have tried to force Shae to give her up. Anyway, it has been a great story and she found Godric. |
| aurora151989 chapter 12 . 10/4/2009 hmm not much to say except... another another! |
| Daryl's Lady chapter 11 . 9/8/2009 aw got to love Godric. So what exactly did she do to Eric?...was it like static electricity? anyway great job with the update. loved it. cant wait for more. |
| murgatroid-98 chapter 11 . 9/8/2009 Poor Luke, so Godric didn't kill Gabe in this one. Have I mentioned that I really like Eurithe? Serves Eric right. |
| DaniD32 chapter 11 . 9/7/2009 Nice update! I love how upset Godric got over her attack. The scene with Eric was pretty funny too. He was just ASKING for it! lol Nice update :) |
| Nelle07 chapter 11 . 9/7/2009 bahaha Love it! |
| Geriana chapter 11 . 9/7/2009 This chapter had me in tears from laughter. |
| Changer of Stories chapter 11 . 9/7/2009 I really like Eurithe and how Eric teases her and Shae. I'm also happy Shae is alive and well and I'm intrigued as to how you've kept Luke semi in the story. Keep the good times rolling mate. Cheers. Changer. |
| Fairy Skull chapter 11 . 9/7/2009 This chapter was great and I can't wait for more! |
| Daryl's Lady chapter 10 . 9/3/2009 awesome job. i cannot wait for more. |
| Supersam1906 chapter 10 . 9/3/2009 very sweet but not telling u to change it but from wat i understand a vamp cant resist their maker...except wen bill knocked his out...HA take that bitch!HAHAHAHAHA! very good keep going |
| Changer of Stories chapter 10 . 9/3/2009 Lovely chapter. I enjoyed the Lucas interaction and the Godric/Shae interaction as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers. Changer. |
