Until she faked her death? Well, that escalated quicky.

Awesome

is there a name stand by 'Ran' or is it past participle form of 'Run'?

You named a dog after byakuya.

I am waiting for Rangiku X Gin and ToshiroXMomo, though, i'll be more delighted if Aki was Toshiro and Karin's child T.T

Great story, wish I could have started reading it when it was first started :)

God I hope this ichigo rukia thing really happens

Riddled with plot holes

it was ok put please to not write any thing like that and i mean the part with ichigo and rukia

that was goooooooooooooood

Percect story I love the whole story

Your chapters were too small and everyone was so OOC, they might as well have been Oc's. Why the sex scene? Don't you think someone would have saw them do it? Why did all of the main characters, Ichigo, Rukia, Renji, Byakuya, Rangiku, Momo etc have to go on the rescue mission? Like literally all of them. Where's Orihime's baby, I thought she was about to have one? Ran, Gin and Aki. Rukia, Rangiku, Momo Ichigo Gin, Toshiro. Why all three. It's great when it's one unique person. It's good when there's two so they won't be alone. It's annoying when it's three because it takes away the unique feel. This was so very rushed and I feel that you should rewrite it.

All I could focus on this chapter was the way you spelt 'reiatsu'. You spelt it "rustiest" Why? Did you type this on your phone, and is autocorrect ruining your life?

Best chapter out of the whole story. kudos for you!

I recommend you lengtehn any new stories. This one was too quick and fast for me to get associated with the characters. Otherwise the scene at the end with Ichigo's proposal and Ran waking up was really sweet. Good job on that one. I also understand your in college and don't have much time at this time but just offering it in case you write again.