Just ... beautiful. I've long come to the conlcusion that you are right, because I think it's important to take the time to tell the people you love how much you love them while they can hear you. Still, when life's passing in a rush, more often than you'd like to forget, you do. You don't tell them. You don't think it could end soon - but there's a real chance. And you showed that briliantly here. Thanks for writing it.

L.

oh wow. this was so beautiful. i loved it.

and the moral of the story: tell your loved ones you love them before it's too late. sniff.

great job. it was beautiful! and i literally saw everyone i love flash through my eyes as i read this. it makes me want to call everyone on my contacts and tell them i love them.

great job 4 someone who doesn't like Liley u did an amazing point of view from both sides.

Oh my god, this story was so heartbreaking, yet so amazing.

I absolutely love it!

Amazing, amazing job. :]

Beautifully, well written.

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Aw... wow. Nice work. And I'm with Melissa and the rest on the never knowing. Just wow.

Awesome one-shot, very well written, liked how you couldn't really predict how it would turn out, plus your writing made it easy to picture the scene, very good :).

Amazing. I never would have known Liley wasn't your thing. Lol.

Like spashley20 said, not many fics that can make someone rethink their life.

Awesome.

A very thought provoking piece. The pacing was excellent, as was the suspense in the lower half. All around, it was a very good read.

brilliant. absolutly brilliant.

there's not many fics that can make me rethink my life.

Aw, this was so great. :) Not your thing? You sure? Could have fooled me. :)

oh man, this was incredible. i really loved it. if you hadn't made a note of it in the beginning, i wouldn't have known that liley isn't your thing-it worked perfectly start to finish. i thought the narrative was a really interesting approach and very fresh. thank you!