beautiful. I would like very much to see the sequel to this :)

amazing!

Oh my... This is so sad ;_;

Omg, so deliciously erotic w/ such a tragic ending. Ma'am , I tip my imaginary hat off 2 u

Omg, so deliciously erotic w/ such a tragic ending. Ma'am , I tip my imaginary hat off 2 u

Omg, so deliciously erotic w/ such a heartbreaking ending. Ma'am I tip my imaginary hat off 2 u

Really good writing.

This is too good! AHHHHHHH! The story is just too good!

Ffff I love this, and after many months of rereading it I have finally decided to review. Much love for you, Moro. Much love for you.

Argh This was so sad and real !

I love the fact that they didn't end all happy lovey dovey

sometimes when things end happy the story doesn't look realistic

So...awesome job ~~

I loved this story and it was just perfect. Tragic and puts my favorite lovers together.

wow, i'm totally balling my eyes out right now. this was awesome! you did an amazing job! i especially enjoyed you're use of diction, and metaphors.

Beautiful. Very smexy, but very eloquently written. The ending is just so damn sad.

That was absolutely tragic. I loved it.

Ah So sad! Yet so beautiful! I'm crazy for your writing. It was like I could feel everything that the characters were feeling. And it flowed together so well. Really loved this 3