Finn is a fucking douchebag of a characte.

Honestly if I was Lance I'd kick Finn's ass. I'd beat the fucking shit out of You.

beautiful cant even begin to describe how amazing this fanfict was you got the characters personalities perfect though i would've liked to see finn buried under five tons of debries or torn apart by logan but it was still good

I hear by make a request, "Thou Shall write more Lancitty Fics!" Seriously, dspite the fact that Kitty was with someone else most of the time (don't do that again:!) it was good story!

LOVE UR STORY, very good and cuute

kitty and lance are my favorite couple in x-men evolution, so thank for creating this story hugs D

Ha! Finn tried to do something, but apparently he didn't know about Logan... *evil smile* XD Yay! They're together! Whoo hoo! This was a great story, and it ended on a great note, too! How awesome! _

Good job!

"she was helping me put sunscreen on!" "with her lips?" such a jackass

i expected the ending to be a bit different (maybe with another beatdown session with lance and finn) but still it was pretty good

Awesome!

Wow, I'm, like, really, really hating Finn right now. He probably told Kitty that Lance was sleeping around, too, just to make her hate him more. The jerk. Or, at least, that's what I'm telling myself. What is it that Kitty saw, I wonder? Please update soon! _

Update soon! I really love the story so far!

Good job!

it was sad :(

aww sunscreen fights are so cute _ makes me wanna attack my boyfriend next time we're out in the sun

this is my favorite chapter so far

yeah, of course I'm enjoying it! It's a great story, though I hope you overcome your writer's block soon. I know what that's like, and if all else fails, B.S. the thing until you know what you want to write again.

Also, is Finn a mutant? Cause thing with the wave was really freaky. Please update when you can!