| Reviews for Citizen Erased |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 10/21/2017 Beautiful |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2017 Love it. Cleverly well written. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2017 Very intriging. |
 S.H. Briggs chapter 12 . 3/6/2017 In chapter 12, one kidnapper calls the other Joseph, and nearly at the end of the same chapter, Cameron recognizes that Johan has spoken. Who's Johan and how does she know his name? |
| MiniLover chapter 18 . 5/10/2016 Such a wonderfully well written story! Loved your in-depth characters and brilliant and original storyline! Had me hooked from the beginning and kept be there right up to the end. I am in love with your writing style. You don't just plod along, trying to advance the plot. You are incredibly descriptive and weave in some brilliant lines. I only wish you had written more Eric stories. I would love to see another original story. Well, on to the sequel. |
| MiniLover chapter 1 . 5/8/2016 Awesome first chapter! Going back for more... |
| Alex chapter 10 . 2/16/2016 You are a brilliant writer! You should write your own books! The popcorn kernel analogy was particularly brilliant! :) |
| tanseynz chapter 17 . 12/18/2014 Genuinely good plotting, using canon in a remarkable way while putting your own spin on it most successfully. Really enjoyed this! |
| JamesNorthman96 chapter 18 . 9/27/2014 I couldn't find your story, Into the Dark |
| ZizzyO chapter 16 . 7/22/2013 Wow... Holy moley! What a cliff-hanger! Great story, kept me hooked and then shoved me off a cliff! Going to sequel pronto! -thumbs up- |
| LinSog93 chapter 16 . 2/15/2013 Really liked the concept of your story! I’m looking forward to read the sequel :) |
| artbyoddisee chapter 16 . 5/23/2011 2 thumbs up...read it in one breath |
| WickedBlue chapter 18 . 11/23/2010 Wow, what an awesome fic. I'm so looking forward to read more. |
| oceanluvr chapter 2 . 11/6/2010 Great start. I love Elliot... I love her name, her attitude... everything. I love that she role played for him. Awesome. |
| Anniely chapter 18 . 9/8/2010 Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story immensely! I really, really liked your character, Elliot, (just a question here: why didn't Eric start calling her by her real name?) she was really 'believable', if you know what I mean. And I liked Eric very much here. He wasn't just a big softie, but he wasn't only calculating, either. However, the twist at the end almost killed me! That is so clever and so unfair at the same time ;) I guess I'll see you at 'Into the Dark'! Anniely Oh, PS: In chapter ten you had a short German sentence "Stoppen Sie bette." If it's supposed to mean "please, stop", it should be "Stoppen Sie bitte". (I am sorry if someone already pointed this out and I am only repeating information, but I couldn't read all the 257 (! wow) reviews.) |
