GOOD

So adorable! Nice ending! :3 Can't wait to read the sequel!

Eh? Wow! Wonderful! How you went even deeper with Setsuna's heart! The imagery is absolutely beautiful! Never in all my years of reading have I encountered with the use of the heart thing(in chapter 3), or anything similar in my perspective. Please, oh please keep writing more! It's beautifully written so far(only read up to chapter 3).

You know something? I love how you add in Setsuna's thoughts. Not many authors do that so thank you. u

Wow, this is so fluffy! Hope there's a sequel!

Awesome story. I just love that Konoka kisses Setsuna as their real first kiss before the pactio kiss. So adorable!

Awwwwww this was so cute & awesome

It's actually not "de gozu" but "de gozaru".

Awesome story! Who knew Asuna had it in her to be a helping hand to friends in love? This was just an amazing story, I loved it! KONOSETSU FOREVER! You're an amazing writer, just brilliant! :)

beautiful!

Yay! This was great- I love the story book ending. :wipes away happy tear:

I like your take on a possible pactio- Chapter 252, while wonderful, doesn't seem to have had much impact on the manga storyline as yet... but this, this I could see being a new, influential factor.

Setsuna angsts a lot, doesn't she? But that hesitance and insecurity is a part of why we love her- if only to see her triumph over her inner adversity and kiss the girl! I love Konoka, she's so awesome, and it's nice to see her playing a role beyond "damsel in distress".

Asuna would totally be the intermediary between our favourite couple- she knows what's going down, even if the other two are too blind XD

And yay, a kiss to finish it off! I'm glad I found this- thank you for writing it!

Love the story! Keep up the good work!

good this is good keep doing konosetsu please

Liked how Konoka saved Setsuna. Sweet how Konoka wanted to share a kiss with Setsuna before they performed the pactio.

Liked how Setsuna saved Konoka. Glad that Setsuna gave Konoka more insight about her feelings.