Cute!~

very cute! i do think it's slightly ooc for abe but not bad at all! and the part where he describes everything he likes about mihashi was written really good and sweetly .

This was absolutely adorable, not OOC at all! i loved it, please write more

"Not answering a worried person makes the person slightly hysteric." How true! My mother is one of those people!. LOL

One Minor Mistake;"...so the only thing I could do was entering the house and sit in the chair next to Mihashi."

It should read "enter" not "entering."

"I don’t only want him on the team, I want him to be here, for me." I love lines like this one.

Overall the story is good, It reads very naturally and fits into the series well.

Nice Pitching!