I remember reading this story way back! I enjoyed reading it again and I'm really glad you're updating it again! Awesome work and keep it up!

why you kill leon?

This fanfic is so amazing! Please continue and write soon! I love this, you're such a great writer! I love how you portray Squall and Rinoa...and all the freaking characters, amazing! I also really love Rinoa's familiar/guide, Crow 3 I hope you write soon, you got yourself a loyal reader I was surprised at how you write Squall, he's alot different than how the real Squall is portrayed None the less, I love it!

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I really liked this chapter.

This chapter completely confused me. Is this a flashback? I'll admit, it's been some time since I read the last chapter, so I may just be forgetting what the beck is going on.

Finally I've caught up. This is such a gripping fic it's crazy! It's interesting to read Rinoa being a hell of a bad girl and while I generally dislike Squall not being together with Rinoa, this will have to dof or now!

Can't wait to see an update!

Cheers

Keep Writing

I am officially drawn into this story now! I hope you'll update often!

You're style of writing is very intense and reads like a spy fiction so well done for that. You should definitely consider writing more often.

Wonder who is Smith and what role he has. An OC?

Too many questions now hopefully reading will glean more.

Cheers

Keep Writing

I liked it. It gave us a better outlook on the Raven's past.

Lol, not only does she attract perverted middle-aged men, but she does girls also! Anyway, that other girl reminds me of Quistis. Albeit, with much more proper speech. I think I agree with your choice of cities, but I think Dollet should be Paris and Winhill perhaps Amsterdam. As for the desert, ermm... What better place than... The Sahara lol... Just some suggestions. And last, but certainly not least, update The Slackers!

Mister crow and strange woman had a past together... And this freelancing thing she's doing is intriguing.

Lol, never thought of Selphie to be pushing buttons like that and... a brawl with Rinoa lol. As munch tension that scene was supposed to be, i can't help but think it was rather comical.

Lol, well, I suppose Alexis isn't as nice as I originally thought, but who can blame her? Some strange girl shows up out of the blue and declared she's gonna take her boyfriend. To make matters worse, the said boyfriend can be pretty thick at times. Lol

Heh, exchanging family heirlooms. How sweet. Anyways, I don't know how others feel about a certain brown-haired harlot, but honestly, I don't think she's all that bad, though of course I understand that she is an obstacle to their relationship.

You know, I'm starting to really get accustomed to your particular style of making rinoa into a badass and squall into a goody two shoe (this story and The Slacker). I have to admit, it was different at first, but I have grown to love it.