I really loved this...
I wanna understand
Update plz :(

I really hope you get around to finishing this story I'd like to see how it ends

i consider it a cliffie. update soon.

It is nice but a little bit short. Still, quite a decent chapter. I think it has a potential to become an interesting story and I'd gladly read more of it. I'm eager to see what happens next, so I'll be waiting for an update. I suggest that you consider getting a beta reader or pay closer attention to punctuation and spelling. Otherwise, it's pretty good.