Dear Gemagi chan this is a cute story. I like your friend's remake of it as well. And happy thank's giving, May God give you many blessings.

hey i love this story so much and want to make a new vrison of this one if that's ok with you
i will make sure to put that if someong wants to fav this story they have to fav your story too

this was very cute!

I've never played the games because I just can't find them, but based of the manga this fits rather well. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is really interesting so far, it would be awesome if you could continue this even if it's been over a year.

That is was so cute!

I love it! This fits so well with the canon and everthing! Peter wasnt OOC or anything, I can't wait to read more, there needs to be more PeterXAlice love.

The way you wrote this was excellent. Can't wait to hear more.

This totally explains why Peter kidnapped her

I never reviewed this for reasons I don't know! But I must say I HAVE to review all your stories. Especially if all are this well written!

Perfectly in character and the flow was perfect! Pft.. I wouldn't be surprised if this was canon!

Oh, I like. Very interesting tweak to have it have been Alice's heartbreak rather than something else that cinched the deal for Peter to fall for her. Excellent!

It didn't seem very OOC and I like it _

Beautiful...

I've only read the manga so for all I know that's what had happened. Wonderfully done!

that was great i so wish that the compon who makes the game and manga could get some more mony to finsh so reading this made me feel happy like there was hope i hope that both of us could contune to suppert the game

wow!amazing description of peters side! :)

you should make a story of your own going off the origional story,you're a good author!

plz make more X)