Short, simple, powerful.

Ohmygoodness, this was beautiful. Simple and short and sweet.

Are you going to make another chapter? I like this story, it is very good. I hope you very soon make another, even if your intertion was to make the entire story one chapter.

Oh, this was lovely. 3 With Vaan and Penelo, there's always this need-but in their case, I don't think it's a need that could be harmful or obsessive, if that makes sense. You captured the simplicity of their relationship and situation beautifully. The whole situation made perfect sense.

Oh god, that was just perfect. :) It's great how you write both Vaan and Penelo. Well done! ~3

Good work! That was kind of sweet, and that part about Penelo talking back

to Ashe was funny.