No no no no no! Not a cliffhanger! The likelihood of an update is pretty low seeing as you haven't updated in about 8 years! :( I really like this story, well written, good storyline, brilliant oc's and an annoyingly good cliffhanger. Please please please, even if you don't do a proper update, could you just do a general synopsis so we know how the story finishes?

moreeeeeee

THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD! I hope you update soon!

WHAT DID HE SEEEEE?! You just had to leave hanging, weren't you?

What happened? What did he saw? What the hell is happening! You have to update, you gotta update. I mean seriously, you can't have that great of a cliff hanger and not update. Please, please, please update!

Pleaseee end it ! I'm begging :/

Whyyyy please end the story ! It's soooo good :'(

omgggggggggg, i just found this story, its amazing but i need to know what happens!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS I CAN'T STAND IT. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND YOU CAN'T JUST PUT IT ON HIATUS FOR A LITTLE OVER TWO YEARS. IM DEPRIVED!

Amazing story!

You. Have. Got. to. Be. KIDDING ME! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE LIKE THAT AND ... UGH!

Firstly, I never realised how often people had flashbacks. Now that I think about it, it makes sense. I actually just thought of something. When she's wherever they go in the car every so often, why doesn't she see memories then? There are a lot of people around her...

Ok... this is about Alice's memories in chapter nine. I know you corrected yourself, but there are more things. Wait... is Wiki even trustworthy? LOL. Anyways, firstly she's older than that when she goes to the asylum (she's born in 1901 and she "dies" in 1920). Secondly, (according to Wiki) Alice's eyes are dark brown as a human. Thirdly, (again according to Wiki) Alice's mother is dead before Alice goes to the asylum.

When you're writing a list, you're not supposed to put a , (comma) before you write "and" (and then put the last thing on the list).

About your author's notes, I kinda feel bad. Your school ended in early July? Mine ends in mid June... end of may, if you don't count exam time...

In chapter 18 you asked why vampires feel warm to each other. The answer is ... well... Why do WE feel warm to each other sometimes? They're all the same temperature I guess...

I think that's about all I have to say...

oh yeah. UPDATE. ! ... sorry...

Keep up the great work! :) (:

Tarah xXx

AHHH! Ugh, a cliffhanger! I hope Kelly'll be okay. I've always hated the fact that Aro smiles so much, too. Honestly, whoever heard of a HYPER vampire? Can you imagine him in bermuda shorts, jumping and dancing around, singing? The very idea makes me giggle. Could you write a chapter in Tristan's POV? It'd be interesting. Please update soon! XD Lady O.

P.S. I mean no offence, but have you noticed that "Kelly" in Percy Jackson is an empousa, and she says that the legend of vampires came from HER, and your main character has the same name?

did Aro see?What what?I dunno...YOU TELL ME!8D!Grrrr...Anyway,I have to apologise for this extremely late review...Sorry Sorry..! I keep reminding myself to REVIEW after I return to Singapore,bt thn some things came up n yea..SORRY!Tho,I Am the first to review in 2011!hhehe..RIght,ookk!I love this chapter!IT iss truly awesome!Esp the cliff-hanger at the end!Now im dying to read chapter 20..

Your description of Susan was great!And awww...Natalie and Kelly..now that they finally meet..Kelly's a vampire..Nat's all weak and sick and vulnerable..just awful..PLZZ let everything turn out finee in the end!ANd only 3 or 4 more chapters to go?I hope not..I haven't had enough of Tristy n KELLY!:(

SO DO update soooon!ur almst reaching a 100 reviews!Woohoo!Update update!YAY!

AAAAAH WHAT DID SHE SHOW HIM?

LOL at one of the last lines by the way XD (sorry if i get this wrong!) "I flung my plan to Edwards mind, my decision to Alices mind and just prayed Tristan would catch on" haha lets hope he does!

Poor, Nat :(

Heyyy! Sorry for the kinda-late-review

Dude this chapt is Awesome! Filled with tension and you have a wonderful cliff-hanger there which makes the story Awesome-er in a way but doesn't make it awesome for the readers. Get it? You know how annoying it can be when they release "teasers" of new books? CoFA? Maximum Ride: Angel? God I want then NOW! They just love to torture readers with preview chapters and cliff-hangers.

Ok, with ur story...hey just a few more chapters more to go? your gonna end it? Where's the fluffffff? Where's the mysterious-guy-who-turned-Alice? Where's Phillip? XD

Anyway liked ur descriptions in Volterra. Aw I'm glad Kelly's over the this-guy-turned-me-and-i'm-destined-to-hate-him-for-eternity thing. You're slower than Film's Percy&Annabeth...

When I read Camille, I instantly pictured her with the Victorian style dress and all. You know, the vampire Camille...

You did a good job on the Volturi. Especially Aro. it just feels...creepy...the shiver-down-the-spine kind of creepy. I don't even think the book did that to me, so what you have there is amazing.

Aw, Kelly and Natalie. That's right, big sisters don't want little sisters running off rescueing them...and there comes Kelly's big plan. I'll leave it up tp one word: Update soon...but no pressure..

(I lost it. the ability to write super long review...I wasted one full week because I can't concentrate on things, and now, I am going to go panic over it...)

Yay! Another great chapter!

Really? It's about to end? But I don't want it to... Is there going to be a sequel or something?

Anyway, gah! Evil cliff-hanger! Evil! Evil! EVIL! :P

I really like this chapter! It's full of suspense and tension...which will of course lead to an amazing next chapter :P

Gah... I feel sad for Kelly and Natalie... Sigh...

Anyway, keep updating! :D:D:D