That was so beautiful? Ugh, I don't even know what to say. Your writing is so raw and lovely and real, and your Mello makes me want to cry. That part where Mello thinks about how he's going to do tomorrow, how this is his last night, I loved that so much. I'll admit that I almost cried when I read that. Anyway, that was powerful and well-written and absolutely amazing, thank you so, so much for sharing this.

This was amazing! I loved the way you've wrote this so beautiful. Thank you for this aweosme story.

Fantastic ficlet!

Oh my gods. The ending...
*sniffs*
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I think I'll take you up on your challenge. It won't be easy but I'll figure something out. :)
Another Nico di Angelo fic, probably...

This is beautifuly crafted.

Beautiful!

Of all the Mello centered fics I have read your the only one I know that stays in character and writes him well, I truly enjoy reading your fics annd I can only hope that you will write more Mello fics.

Hmmm I wouldn't mind reading Near centered fics either... :)

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

loved it.

The ending made my eyes water a bit. Very wonderful story.

I found this recommended on TvTropes and I've got to say: Wow.

Your Mello is amazingly characterised and your writing is really amazing. The ending was beautiful (and I don't even know if that's the word that fits but that's the one I'm going with).

that made me cry

Wow. I'm just really.. speechless. This was so insightful, and written so well. You have an amazing way with words, let me tell you that.

I also liked the idea - seven kisses - though the last scene could have been a story on its own. I think that was my favourite section, as well. Got a lot of the best lines.

You can - and should - be very proud of this! Definitely into my faves :)

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i'm close to falling asleep at the computer, so i shall put this onto this site tomorrow morning.

:D

Beautiful and poignant. I always love getting a glimpse into character's lives beyond what we've seen, and being that Mello is one of my favorite Death Note characters, I especially enjoyed your piece. Thank you for the lovely read. You understand Mello as if you sat down and spoke with him or got deep inside his head. Great, great, great. I don't really know what else to say.