| Reviews for Bite of Revenge |
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  cow chapter 6 . 8/14/2018 you did you stop T.T |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2017 Well done. You just improved my thoughts on this movie. |
| Tori chapter 6 . 8/18/2017 You are awesome! |
| AncaElya chapter 6 . 3/20/2017 I love it. Wish there was more. Sigh! |
| AncaElya chapter 5 . 3/20/2017 You did very well with the panicked Snake Eyes. I don't really want to move to the next chapter knowing it's the last one but then again... yes I do.. since it's more of the good stuff :) |
| AncaElya chapter 4 . 3/20/2017 No... I don't want to kill you... I think. I still like the way you write way too much to inflict any actual bodily harm. Arigato |
| AncaElya chapter 3 . 3/20/2017 At this point I am seriously hoping this story will never end... |
| AncaElya chapter 2 . 3/20/2017 I like this chapter - no matter how short - almost more than the first one. Dancing? Not quite what I would have expected... Not that I couldn't picture it. I guess a Kata would seem more... Snake Eyes-like but yeah... Dancing... Like the chapter in any case :) |
| AncaElya chapter 1 . 3/20/2017 I kinda like the Snake eyes / Scarlett pairing too and even more I like the way you write. Very smooth text to read. I understand Ripcord being there is an artistic freedom thing (he landed on White House yard, right?), but that's not bothering me. I'm not a Nitpicker ;) . All and all very good story. It's not everyday you find a good less-action, more-personal story of Snake Eyes nor all the Joes. Thank you for this one. |
| Skye Starre chapter 1 . 11/26/2015 Hello! I'm a huge G.I Joe fan, and I'm sorry to say, but your story just drive me crazy. I know all the symptoms of Cobra venom; you got some of them right. If I was to tell everything, it would take a year of typing. But for the most part, I liked your idea; it just needs some work. I think you should keep going. Again, I'm sorry if I sound cruel. |
| Persons chapter 6 . 7/25/2015 can't wait for the next installment don't take too long |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/21/2015 Must know what happens! I need to know! |
| Maddy R chapter 6 . 2/8/2015 Must... Have... More... I love this story, and I can't wait for the next part! Have you considered doing more with Timber, maybe putting him and Scarlett both sitting with Snakes as he's slowly recovering? (Just a thought, feel free to ignore me.) I need more chapters, it's soooo good! Thank you for writing this great story so far, please continue to do so! |
| ceceloveskitty chapter 6 . 12/6/2013 i thought that you did good but could you please make it to were snake eyes gets better and goses to see scarlett and then talks t her by signing i would think that wouuld make people feel like you would be close to finishig the story... *runs away from snake eyes with a monky eating a banna smothie* |
 teamgijoe chapter 6 . 9/2/2013 update please please x x x |
