| Reviews for The Trials of Love |
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anal man 69 chapter 1 . 5/6 beautiful flawless loved every single bit it was epic, soiled my pants thanks |
Gary chapter 3 . 3/13 Thank you for this. It will get me through my coronavirus quarantine ;) |
russianman554 chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 i love cheese |
Nugga Hernandez chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 Thank you very much for this outstanding fan-fiction. I was even in class and had to share my devotion for such beautiful art, my peers agree. All of us, around the table had just read through the entire thing. keep doing what you are, because we all think its absolutely outstanding. Well done. We look forward to more of your work in the future. -Nugga Hernandez out. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 What a beautiful story! I'll admit I had my doubts about how the whole heat thing was gonna play out but it turned out to be well done. There were lots of fluffy moments that made me smile(even when they were in the middle of making love, the forehead-touching was so aaa cute) and the whole atmosphere was very romantic. So yeah, loved the story, loved the fluff. Glad to find cute content of these two! |
ANW2004 chapter 3 . 2/21/2019 Amazing |
Tom Cash chapter 4 . 7/1/2018 Amazing fic mate. It was very special |
Tom Cash chapter 4 . 4/25/2018 Really amazing. So overwhelming Well Done |
DashiePrice chapter 4 . 7/17/2013 Very well written, I loved every second of it. I hope you write more stories in the future, maybe even come up with something completely original. Hey, I'd buy it. |
CTCB chapter 4 . 5/4/2011 I've read each chapter and it's great... Please write a sequel to this... It's amazing! :D |
ConfuzzledAussie chapter 4 . 12/30/2009 I'm surprised you haven't gotten any reviews for this yet... it's quite excellent, considering some of the other Wallace and Gromit fics on here. I have to admit I skipped most of the third chapter... lemons make me feel slightly unwell, sorry... :( But what I forced myself to read of that Chapter was very well-written. Heck, the whole story is great. The first two chapters really had that Wallace and Gromit flavour to them. The only thing I find remotely wrong with this story is that the final chapter seems separate from the rest, in tone and in the way the events fold out. I think you would have done better to leave the story at the end of chapter 3, and release chapter 4 as a sort of epilogue, or maybe even a oneshot separate from the main story (rewritten to make the story separate, of course). It seems to me that this story is supposed to be one about lust and physical yearning... the pregnancy, the wedding and the birth just don't seem to fit. But hey, it's your story, you can do what you like with it. :) I enjoyed this little exploration of what might happen between Gromit and Fluffles, and I hope you continue with fics of this quality in the future. Keep writing... :D |