Wow! They did it because Michaela wanted it so bad and didn't want to wait any longer! You so sensitive describe their lovemaking, - congratulation! Not much stories which tell about their lovemaking are so soulful.

Brilliant :D

Really well written :D

Pooky xxx

Wow...total hotness!

I like the fact that they kind of take it slow and work with each other all the way and the setting I think is also a bit romantic in a way making one thing lead to another and the end of it is really cute as well :o)

well i always believe that reviews should be honest in their appraisal.

in itself this is a well written short story, and would be a perfectly decent love scene except for two things:

it was far too early on for that to happen; michaela would not have done that sort of thing BEFORE declaring their feelings, and sully would have chosen somewhere far mor romantic than the ground.

"Thank you" I would have expected more of a reaction. lol

Whoa! "I want you to show me what I have missed for all these years." LOL! Michaela, you are something. LOL! Yeah, just show me and yep, of course he is all too happy to comply. But he certainly works fast. Oh, definitely perfect for the honeymoon scene. It must have been really uncomfortable making love on that dirt and pebbled ground and not to mention, wet from the rain seeping in as well as cold. LOL! They didn't care, while being in the throes of love. You obviously love that song. Yeah, I always felt it perfect for them. LOL! Okay, which one of them is fantasizing this? Obvious Sully. Well, written, and fun despite suddenly them being caught up that way.