Update!

Stop dragging things out and basically repeating the same crap every single chapter. Move on with the story. Please.

Update.

Have him fucking move on already! Jeez!

Please post more soon.

This is truly interesting but sad to read; please update very soon

Poor Joey; he does not deserve what had happened to him. I hope he finds new love instead of just sticking with kaiba. Heck even Valon is better than kaiba. Servers kaiba right for what he did to joey

Are you ever going to update? Please update.

I like this story. But it seems like you're dragging this out. You've had Joey do nothing but mope and be jobless. Have him move on or at least try to move on. Have him go on dates with girls and guys or something. This is a good story. Hope you post more soon.

Great story. Update soon!

Great FIC! I love it please update soon it's so dramatic!:)

it would have hurt keba more if mokuba told him he was a monster or sum thing like that still love ur story thou

Yay, I'm so happy! I started reading this storry before I got an account, almost a year or so ago, and I competely lost track of it. Finally got a hold of it! *victory dance* Anyway, I love it, and it's funny how even when Kaiba actually does something for Mokuba and for his company, everyone got the impression he did it for money. Poor Kaiba, they're giving him such a hard time... though he did kinda ask for it, but still. He's already suffering enough from what he did. They could go a little easier on him. Then again, they don't know that... well anyway, I must say, there are those sequences that make me feel like hitting something. And those are the parts where people, especially Joey, think about him moving on and finding someone else. Screw that! He has to be completely sure it's over! He has absolutely no ideea what's been going on with Kaiba after the break-up, so he can't know that Kaiba's really, actually over him! Oh god's, I don't like rushing people, but pleease update soon! I'm dieing here!(I'm posting this review a day later that I read the chap) Pweeasee!*puppy dog eyes*

kaiba trying to drink his sorrows away is...different. will something happen to him while he's drunk?

nice work matching your chapter to the lyrics.

waiting to see what happens next. :)

dude! es demasiada paja! paja innecesaria e irrelevante...seguiré leyendo, tengo esperanzas de que esto mejore... tiene una idea de drama muy buena, pero el plot empezó muy rápido y se a mantenido flojo. Porfavor no lo mandes a pique!

:( Where's Joey?