Hot and cute!

I love this story

I loved this! Awesome!

Hot

Wow. That was good. Perfect way to play Twister.

Interesting way for them to get together. Great story i will definitely never look at twister the same way again lol

Oh my god! The entire thing is good, but the ending is so cute! I loved it!

awesome one shot! sweet and sexy all at the same time!

Oh this was a work of beauty. So happy i read it. Wish you had somewhere around 30 fics, all completed, so that i could enjoy each in my free time. Unfortunately i see you haven't updated your other work in a long time. Guess you stopped, huh? :( so i'm not gonna start reading Bloodlust(whoch i am sure is just as great as the other 2fics) solely because it's unfinished status will only depress me. Like so many amazing works of art out there.
At least, thank you for the other two fics. They are worth every second. Cheers!

Oh man, this was soooo good! You made the interaction feel so real as they bumbled and flirted - so cute!

I loved reading this. Any hope for a sequel?

Really good

I like this story.. Hope to read more..

I absolutely LOVE it. :)

I will admit to not liking when Darien uses the words 'hot' or 'baby' since I don't think it really suites his canon personality. Or the fact that 'fuck' came from Sarena's mouth. But its only those minor things, other than that I have no regrets of reading this!